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From: Aaron Gillies
Subject: Re: Miss you - Wrapped
Date: 30 Dec 2004 16:37:43
Message: <41d47527$1@news.povray.org>
Tim:

The barn looks much better.  Looks like a couple of probs are around the 
base of the tree and the cat, though.

Aaron


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From: Tim Nikias
Subject: Re: Miss you - Wrapped
Date: 30 Dec 2004 19:58:26
Message: <41d4a432@news.povray.org>
> The barn looks much better.  Looks like a couple of probs are around the
> base of the tree and the cat, though.

As mentioned in my original post: the res for the foreground heightfield was
missed and kept at preview-resolution, which is one vertex per POV-Unit. If
you look at the former image, that one had 15 per unit, the final will have
probably 25 or so.

-- 
"Tim Nikias v2.0"
Homepage: <http://www.nolights.de>


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From: Tim Nikias
Subject: Re: Miss you - Wrapped
Date: 30 Dec 2004 19:59:46
Message: <41d4a482$1@news.povray.org>
> Hope not. The ground normals are f+++ed. See around the cat and tree.

Mentioned that in the text accompanying the post ;-) : the resolution for
the foreground heightfield was missed and kept at preview res, which is one
vertex per POV unit. Final will of course have something closer to 30 or so,
the last update had 15.

> Nice scene though.

Thank you!

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"Tim Nikias v2.0"
Homepage: <http://www.nolights.de>


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From: Tim Nikias
Subject: Re: Miss you - Wrapped
Date: 30 Dec 2004 20:00:43
Message: <41d4a4bb$1@news.povray.org>
> That is an improvement!
> I like the way the colors harmonize now.
> And the placement of the birdhouse and barn with branch on axis is
> satifying.
> The barn echoes the birdhouse and makes a story which goes beyond bird and
> cat.
> The wilds on the left, the domestic on the right and the tension between
> them works well.
> The moon has become superfluous - its a detail that doesn't hurt and
doesn't
> help.
> Its been a pleasure observing the creative process.
> Well done.

Thanks for all the feedback on various details, seems like I really can call
it a wrap. :-)

Regards,
Tim

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"Tim Nikias v2.0"
Homepage: <http://www.nolights.de>


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From: Tim Nikias
Subject: Re: Miss you - Wrapped
Date: 30 Dec 2004 20:01:42
Message: <41d4a4f6$1@news.povray.org>
> Verrrry nice!

Thank you.

> (Not sure a farmer would leave the barn door standing open in the middle
> of winter, but that's a minor nit. :-)

Well, otherwise it wouldn't have been to visible, and who knows, maybe the
farmer is just inside, searching his cat? :-)

> The grass adds a nice touch. You should turn this into a holiday
> greeting card. :-)

Nah, special gifts always stay unique... :-)

-- 
"Tim Nikias v2.0"
Homepage: <http://www.nolights.de>


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From: Tim Nikias
Subject: Re: Miss you - Wrapped
Date: 30 Dec 2004 20:03:57
Message: <41d4a57d@news.povray.org>
> Did you intentionally leave out the cat's foot prints?  I thought they
were
> a nice touch.

Nope, lost due to too low resolution. They'll be back in the final. Note
that the foreground heightfield is based upon a function which I scripted so
that I can just say: "make footprint there, there, and there, add some snow
there...". Later on, I decide the resolution for the heightfield. I keep it
low for fast previews (e.g. when testing the sky, or the barn in the
background), but put it higher on detailed runs. I forgot to set it higher
on this one.

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"Tim Nikias v2.0"
Homepage: <http://www.nolights.de>


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From: Slime
Subject: Re: Miss you - Wrapped
Date: 30 Dec 2004 21:45:14
Message: <41d4bd3a@news.povray.org>
I think this is great for the final version. The tweak to the fence helped,
I think. My only complaints would be that I don't like the barn color
(though it's better since it's not as distracting as the red), the shadows
in the forest seem a little too grey (maybe darken them?), and I'm not sure
why you reduced the moon brightness. But if you like it this way, keep it,
it's very good.

BTW, is this your POVCOMP WIP?

 - Slime
 [ http://www.slimeland.com/ ]


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From: Thomas de Groot
Subject: Re: Miss you - Wrapped
Date: 31 Dec 2004 03:02:54
Message: <41d507ae@news.povray.org>
Hi Tim,
Perhaps because I have a very special relation to cats, but I find your
scene very appealing!
Excellent special gift....


Thomas

PS by the way, will you post your snow macro some day? Would be useful...


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From: Tim Nikias
Subject: Re: Miss you - Wrapped
Date: 31 Dec 2004 04:30:05
Message: <41d51c1d$1@news.povray.org>
> I think this is great for the final version.

Thank you very much!

> The tweak to the fence helped,
> I think. My only complaints would be that I don't like the barn color
> (though it's better since it's not as distracting as the red), the shadows
> in the forest seem a little too grey (maybe darken them?),

There's some fog in the scene to create some distant haze effect, and if
affects the forest, too, of course.

> and I'm not sure
> why you reduced the moon brightness. But if you like it this way, keep it,
> it's very good.

Nah, I think I'll up it a little again.

> BTW, is this your POVCOMP WIP?

Nope, just a christmas gift (now a little late) for a very good friend of
mine.

-- 
"Tim Nikias v2.0"
Homepage: <http://www.nolights.de>


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From: Tim Nikias
Subject: Re: Miss you - Wrapped
Date: 31 Dec 2004 04:33:00
Message: <41d51ccc$1@news.povray.org>
> Hi Tim,
> Perhaps because I have a very special relation to cats, but I find your
> scene very appealing!
> Excellent special gift....

Thank you!

> PS by the way, will you post your snow macro some day? Would be useful...

Yup. Once the image is rendered at 100dpi for print, I want to clean the
codes and release them. The snow macro is first on the to-do list, as
several have said that they're interested in them. :-)

-- 
"Tim Nikias v2.0"
Homepage: <http://www.nolights.de>


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