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I feel like there's something missing in this image, but I can't decide what....
-Ed
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Edward Wedig
aka Doc Brown
Graphic Artist, 3D Designer, Gamemaster, Nice Guy
http://www.netwalk.com/~docbrown
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Edward Wedig wrote:
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> I feel like there's something missing in this image, but I can't decide what....
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> -Ed
> --
> Edward Wedig
> aka Doc Brown
> Graphic Artist, 3D Designer, Gamemaster, Nice Guy
> http://www.netwalk.com/~docbrown
I think from a composition and modeling stand point you have done quite
well. I too agree that it is lacking in some overall feel and perhaps it
is the total uniformity of colors used. There is nothing contrasting in the
image to make the important parts stand out and be noticed. What exactly you
may choose to change in this I cannot say but I believe it could bennifit from
a better distribution or change in color scheme.
--
Ken Tyler
mailto://tylereng@pacbell.net
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Edward Wedig wrote:
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> I feel like there's something missing in this image, but I can't decide what....
>
Me too, I think an intruder may add some feeling. I thought of a
flying butterfly, near the camera but not in the middle of the
picture...
Just a thought.
-- j.grimbert
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It would look really cool with Davros (not sure if that's how it's spelt) in
the forground...
Stephen & Tara
ste### [at] lexicon netnospam
"All that glitters has a high refractive index."
Edward Wedig wrote in message <36DDC5A4.C4764302@kreber.com>...
>I feel like there's something missing in this image, but I can't decide
what....
>
>-Ed
>--
>Edward Wedig
>aka Doc Brown
>Graphic Artist, 3D Designer, Gamemaster, Nice Guy
>http://www.netwalk.com/~docbrown
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It needs an intruder preferably the tardis or one of the 8 Doctors.......
Edward Wedig wrote:
> I feel like there's something missing in this image, but I can't decide what....
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> -Ed
> --
> Edward Wedig
> aka Doc Brown
> Graphic Artist, 3D Designer, Gamemaster, Nice Guy
> http://www.netwalk.com/~docbrown
>
> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
> [Image]
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Edward Wedig wrote in message <36DDC5A4.C4764302@kreber.com>...
>I feel like there's something missing in this image, but I can't decide
what....
>
Very nice, are these CSG's ?
Just a couple of suggestions :-
1. The "Eye" needs some kind of iris they all look blind with the solid grey
disk, maybe add some reflection to it.
2. The yellow lights on the head dome could do with being bigger.
3. I think that they should be looking in different directions from the way
they are facing. At present they look as if the head doesn't rotate.
4. Why not have one Gold or White Dalek, if I remember correctly they were
higher rank.
5. Davros would be nice, but maybe a little tricky to model :).
Regards,
Peter H.
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Try this...
adjust the angle on the plunger and gun stick, so they both point in
slightly different directions, and turn the head part slight to one side or
the other.
it will make then look a little more real.
the background cavern needs to be lighter, try an off white
Rick
Edward Wedig wrote in message <36DDC5A4.C4764302@kreber.com>...
>I feel like there's something missing in this image, but I can't decide
what....
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>-Ed
>--
>Edward Wedig
>aka Doc Brown
>Graphic Artist, 3D Designer, Gamemaster, Nice Guy
>http://www.netwalk.com/~docbrown
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Peter Houston wrote:
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> Edward Wedig wrote in message <36DDC5A4.C4764302@kreber.com>...
> >I feel like there's something missing in this image, but I can't decide
> what....
> >
>
> Very nice, are these CSG's ?
>
Yep, the "Dr Who Technical Manual" was very helpful....
> Just a couple of suggestions :-
> 1. The "Eye" needs some kind of iris they all look blind with the solid grey
> disk, maybe add some reflection to it.
It was supposed to be more of a white. I'll try something else to fix it.
> 2. The yellow lights on the head dome could do with being bigger.
> 3. I think that they should be looking in different directions from the way
> they are facing. At present they look as if the head doesn't rotate.
True.
> 4. Why not have one Gold or White Dalek, if I remember correctly they were
> higher rank.
Or the Red ones from the movies (old movies, not the modern Fox one...).
> 5. Davros would be nice, but maybe a little tricky to model :).
Yes, but maybe with a wrinkled normal....er...never mind. <G>
-Ed
--
Edward Wedig
aka Doc Brown
Graphic Artist, 3D Designer, Gamemaster, Nice Guy
http://www.netwalk.com/~docbrown
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Rick wrote:
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> Try this...
>
> adjust the angle on the plunger and gun stick, so they both point in
> slightly different directions, and turn the head part slight to one side or
> the other.
i'll try that.
>
> it will make then look a little more real.
>
> the background cavern needs to be lighter, try an off white
I'll try increasing the ambient. Maybe that'll help.
>
> Rick
>
> Edward Wedig wrote in message <36DDC5A4.C4764302@kreber.com>...
> >I feel like there's something missing in this image, but I can't decide
> what....
> >
> >-Ed
> >--
> >Edward Wedig
> >aka Doc Brown
> >Graphic Artist, 3D Designer, Gamemaster, Nice Guy
> >http://www.netwalk.com/~docbrown
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Edward Wedig
aka Doc Brown
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I'd try a different angle, perhaps a bit of fog...
--
//Spider
( spi### [at] bahnhofse ) [ http://www.bahnhof.se/~spider/ ]
#declare life = rand(seed(42))*sqrt(-1);
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