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From: =Bob=
Subject: Dusk
Date: 3 Nov 2004 19:59:10
Message: <41897ede$1@news.povray.org>
Working up a new picture. This is 550K jpeg 1280x1024:

http://sdg.ag.uidaho.edu/Images/Dusk01.jpg

Comments and suggestions most welcome!
=Bob=


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From: Michael Raiford
Subject: Re: Dusk
Date: 3 Nov 2004 22:26:38
Message: <4189a16e$1@news.povray.org>
=Bob= wrote:
> Working up a new picture. This is 550K jpeg 1280x1024:
> 
> http://sdg.ag.uidaho.edu/Images/Dusk01.jpg
> 
> Comments and suggestions most welcome!
> =Bob=

Wow! Nice. Only suggestion I could make is use AA... but, you knew that :)

I assume you're using media for the sky?

Reminds me of some sunset photos I've taken ...


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From: Thomas de Groot
Subject: Re: Dusk
Date: 4 Nov 2004 03:04:08
Message: <4189e278$1@news.povray.org>
The feeling of being a small bug in the grass is overpowering!
Well done! Nice sky!

Thomas


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From: =Bob=
Subject: Re: Dusk
Date: 4 Nov 2004 11:31:47
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"Michael Raiford" <mra### [at] hotmailcom> wrote in message
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: Wow! Nice. Only suggestion I could make is use AA... but, you knew that :)

Yeah, it's going to need some serious AA.

: I assume you're using media for the sky?

Yes.

: Reminds me of some sunset photos I've taken ...

Cool, thanks!
=Bob=


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From: =Bob=
Subject: Re: Dusk
Date: 4 Nov 2004 11:32:14
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"Thomas de Groot" <t.d### [at] internlnet> wrote in message
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: The feeling of being a small bug in the grass is overpowering!
: Well done! Nice sky!

Thanks! I think I still need to work on the moon. It
looks a little tto close.
=Bob=


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From: Tim Nikias
Subject: Re: Dusk
Date: 4 Nov 2004 11:54:00
Message: <418a5ea8@news.povray.org>
Like it, good job!

I'd suggest a little less of the bush to the left though. It looks like a
really tangled mess and, to me at least, quickly just turns into a black
"thing", if you understand what I mean. The right one looks proper because
of all the leaves. Maybe making them slighty translucent..?

I like the colors of the clouds, though I feel they could be a little
brighter, but that's just me. Might be my screen gamma as well. But I'd also
suggest some more detail for the clouds. With the black foreground, I feel
like the background should have a lot of visual details...

And the moon looks a little too much 3d to me. I normally have the feeling
that the moon is more or less a disc when looking at it. The shadow is much
sharper on it as well, not that smooth.

All those nitpickings aside though it looks great and should definitely turn
out to become a wonderful image! :-)

Regards,
Tim
-- 
"Tim Nikias v2.0"
Homepage: <http://www.nolights.de>


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From: =Bob=
Subject: Re: Dusk
Date: 4 Nov 2004 13:22:05
Message: <418a734d$1@news.povray.org>
"Tim Nikias" <JUSTTHELOWERCASE:timISNOTnikias(at)gmx.netWARE> wrote in message
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: Like it, good job!

Thanks!

: I'd suggest a little less of the bush to the left though. It looks like a
: really tangled mess and, to me at least, quickly just turns into a black
: "thing", if you understand what I mean. The right one looks proper because
: of all the leaves. Maybe making them slighty translucent..?

I will try this. I kind-of like "black thing" but I will try.

: I like the colors of the clouds, though I feel they could be a little
: brighter, but that's just me. Might be my screen gamma as well. But I'd also
: suggest some more detail for the clouds. With the black foreground, I feel
: like the background should have a lot of visual details...

I agree. I'm trying to get more detail and puffiness in the
clouds. I have alot of media in the way in the picture, so
I'm reducing some of it  too.

: And the moon looks a little too much 3d to me. I normally have the feeling
: that the moon is more or less a disc when looking at it. The shadow is much
: sharper on it as well, not that smooth.

I have yet to figure out how to make it look right. Currently, it's
just a sphere way out there. But it doesn't look right.

: All those nitpickings aside though it looks great and should definitely turn
: out to become a wonderful image! :-)

Thanks, still working on it!
=Bob=


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From: St 
Subject: Re: Dusk
Date: 4 Nov 2004 14:24:47
Message: <418a81ff@news.povray.org>
"=Bob=" <robertUNDERSCOREdobbinsATmailDOTtdsDOTnet> wrote in message
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> "Thomas de Groot" <t.d### [at] internlnet> wrote in message
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> : The feeling of being a small bug in the grass is overpowering!
> : Well done! Nice sky!
>
> Thanks! I think I still need to work on the moon. It
> looks a little tto close.

  That was what I was thinking. Lovely image though. I feel small,
looking up...

    ~Steve~


> =Bob=
>
>


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