Like it, good job!

I'd suggest a little less of the bush to the left though. It looks like a
really tangled mess and, to me at least, quickly just turns into a black
"thing", if you understand what I mean. The right one looks proper because
of all the leaves. Maybe making them slighty translucent..?

I like the colors of the clouds, though I feel they could be a little
brighter, but that's just me. Might be my screen gamma as well. But I'd also
suggest some more detail for the clouds. With the black foreground, I feel
like the background should have a lot of visual details...

And the moon looks a little too much 3d to me. I normally have the feeling
that the moon is more or less a disc when looking at it. The shadow is much
sharper on it as well, not that smooth.

All those nitpickings aside though it looks great and should definitely turn
out to become a wonderful image! :-)

Regards,
Tim
-- 
"Tim Nikias v2.0"
Homepage: <http://www.nolights.de>

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