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this is easily one of the coolest pov images i've ever seen! excellent work so
far :) I like the clouds, though the edges are a little sharp. I don't have
any issues with the fog in the distance, though I suggest either a darker grey
or something closer to the color of the sky. i like those dots around the
tower, it gives the image more life. i like the water; the streaks where the
water is going over the falls could use some work, though the only way I can
think of to render realistic water is with a particle generator of some
sorts. i realy like the color scheme and modelling of the spaceship
great work,
eugene
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I liked the old clouds better as well.
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I liked the old clouds better. If I were you I would ditch realism and go for
surrealism and a paintlike texture to the image. You're 99% there!
BTW, the turbulence before the waterfall... suck. Well, I had to give one
criticism... :)
This one looks darkened a bit. That I like.
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Hi, H.E.,
H.E. Day wrote:
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> Well, I tried to fix the clouds, ...etc
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well, I like this image as is. The "flaws" in the picture/code are what
gives the scene your own "artistic" touch. Great work! Any detail
shots of the flying city?
Blessings,
Brendan
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