I like the concept very much. Lots of good elements in the scene.

I detect some focal blur; but there aren't enough objects in the foreground to
really sell that. Perhaps some fuzzy darker shapes in the lower left would help
(and would also help balance the composition, IMO.)

The 'overall' color cast of all the seas-floor elements should, I think, be a
little more to the blue-green. A more restricted color palette, in other words.
That is, unless the idea is that there are lights down there, artificially
lighting up the environment.

Final nitpic: The statue, where it meets the sand, seems to need
something--grunge, or a pit/raised sand area. I'm not sure what actually happens
to buried objects in a sandy sea bed; it just looks a bit too abrupt and clean.

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