"waggy" <hon### [at] handbasketorg> wrote:
> Warp wrote:
> >
> > In fact, better split all your infinitives so that you have "<subject> to"
> > at the very beginning, and "<verb> <object>" at the very end of the
> > three-line sentence.
> >
> I already got busted for having three split infinitives in the first fifteen
> pages, and for ending sentences with prepositions...
>
> I apologize to you. That was a compound sentence. It should be split into two
> sentences. This writing style is difficult. It reads like a series of telegrams.
> Stop. I cannot connect two ideas. Stop. Please make it stop. Stop.

you're not keeping with the times, kid.  They are very obviously trying to
educate capable twitter writers.

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