Warp wrote:
>
> In fact, better split all your infinitives so that you have "<subject> to"
> at the very beginning, and "<verb> <object>" at the very end of the
> three-line sentence.
>
I already got busted for having three split infinitives in the first fifteen
pages, and for ending sentences with prepositions...

I apologize to you. That was a compound sentence. It should be split into two
sentences. This writing style is difficult. It reads like a series of telegrams.
Stop. I cannot connect two ideas. Stop. Please make it stop. Stop.

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