Hi,

Those are very interesting changes from your last post. The new tar looks a lot
better, but maybe a little too bumpy. I would imagine that tar would be a little
smoother on top, even if it's covering a bumpy surface because tar is so
viscous.

The lighter-colored objects that run along the bottom and middle of the building
on the left look better now by adding some contrast to the building and framing
the flower. However, in my opinion the previous brick colors, being darker than
the new colors, contrasted better with the sunflower. I think adjusting the
light so that it shines on the sunflower more is an improvement.

One suggestion might be to add some curvature to the sunflower stem, if
possible.

Regards,
Dave Blandston

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