Jaime Vives Piqueres <jai### [at] ignoranciaorg> wrote:
> I was practicing with Chief Architect, and did this hotel corridor... it was
> so boring that I decided to have some fun adding some story to it.

That looks really good!  Much more interesting too.  Something about the focal
blur throws of my sense of scale just a bit.  Maybe a tad too much on the tape?
 The only other things I would recommend would be to get rid of the sharp
shadows on the lights, and, at least from my experience, pools of blood on
carpet tend to be a little darker when dried--almost a reddish-brown color.
Oops.  I think I've said too much.

 - Ricky

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