> I have no idea what causes the white lines on the sails. It is due to
> fog-media, but I don't now why.

What are the sails made from? I've seen similar artifacts in my own work when
using sphere_sweeps and other parametrics (which I've found is often due to
rounding/precision errors). Scaling the entire scene several times larger often
fixes that sort of thing for me.

Okay, the critique: the near shoreline looks a bit too geometric (faceted) to me
agaisnt the water, and I think the grass is too uniformly green.

Overall a nice scene though, very tranquil.

-Rob

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