Amazing! The time and effort you've put into this shows through in its sheer
quality. The colours are great, vibrant 50s pulp bursts from the image, and
I agree, keep the magenta tripod 'eyes'! The reason the tripod in the
distance on the left looks a little weirdly lit is because it's standing
right over the fires, am I right? If so, keep it as it is, leisurely
examination will reveal this to the attentive viewer.

And that explosion! A superb piece of work. By all means make the smoke and
flame trails parabolic, but not too curved, the explosion does look 'young'
enough that the straight paths look fine. I think keeping them straight
would make it look more violent and destructive, too.

I honestly have nothing more to suggest... it looks as finished a piece of
work as I've ever seen :-)

Bill

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