"Gail Shaw" <initialsurname@sentech sa dot com> wrote:
> Changed the sky to something a bit more realistic (The previous one was my
> poor attempt at a sunrise)
>
> Changed the camera angle slightly
>
> Increased the amount of surface mist.
>
> Comments?

Looks great.  It's probably just this LCD I'm viewing it on, but my only
problem with it is the transition from the hills to the sky.  It looks a
bit like someone was taking a long exposure photo and bumped the camera
halfway through.  I think that one edge needs more blur, or maybe turn down
the contrast just a bit.

The trees go very nicely into the fog and the hills, but the contrast is
lower there...  I'm not quite sure how to suggest a fix either, OTOH as I
said at the start, it might not even be a real problem.

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