"Bill Pragnell" <bil### [at] hotmailcom> wrote:
> Greetings all.
>
> Here's the nearly-final version of my entry for this round of the IRTC. I
> still need to tweak a few things, it's taking far too long to render at
> present. The shadows need to be a little smoother, the floor normals need
> toning down (they're all but invisible and take ages to render). I'm
> thinking of changing the rotation on the girl a bit (although probably not
> the pose). Finally, I might remove the ashtray on the table; it's a little
> over-detailed and takes inordinately longer to render than other areas.
> Maybe I'll just edit the detail down a bit.
>
> I think the overall brightness is about right, but this image has been
> gamma-corrected from the original, which is much darker. That's what
> developing a scene on a laptop screen does for you...
>
> Comments welcome, although it might be a bit late in the day to take on any
> extensive suggestions!
>
> Bill

I like the floor normal too. I looks like carpet to me. I think the girl is
fine, although perhaps some kind of diaphanous gown or something would be
good. Also... nipples? Not that it matters. I know she comes from DAZ
without.

I have to say I particularly like the texture on the green vase, it looks
very good to me.

-Stefan

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