"Bill Pragnell" <bil### [at] hotmailcom> wrote:
> Greetings all.
>
> Here's the nearly-final version of my entry for this round of the IRTC. I
> still need to tweak a few things, it's taking far too long to render at
> present. The shadows need to be a little smoother, the floor normals need
> toning down (they're all but invisible and take ages to render). I'm
> thinking of changing the rotation on the girl a bit (although probably not
> the pose). Finally, I might remove the ashtray on the table; it's a little
> over-detailed and takes inordinately longer to render than other areas.
> Maybe I'll just edit the detail down a bit.
>
> I think the overall brightness is about right, but this image has been
> gamma-corrected from the original, which is much darker. That's what
> developing a scene on a laptop screen does for you...
>
> Comments welcome, although it might be a bit late in the day to take on any
> extensive suggestions!
>
> Bill

     She seems almost too solid, (although, she is holding a physical
object, so mayhap that was the intent.) But it seems to me, that it would
look a little better if you could see the lines of objects behind her.
Also, I can't say I like the chair, but I've never been a fan of
modernistic furniture, maybe it would blend better if you changed the color
to something more neutral.  Just an opinion, though.

     Otherwise, it looks very good.  Keep it up.

Regards,

ADB

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