"Marc" <jac### [at] wanadoofr> wrote:
> Here is the last version of my Ankh-Morpokian scene.
> Slightly tuned down the fog, added turbulence to the ground fog, risen eye
> glows brightness, lit windows of the back ground house on the right
> hand...(enough irregular verbs :-p)
>
> What do you think?
>
Who in their right, or even their left, mind would leave a ground floor
window open in Ankh-Morpok?
Other than that it is quite realistic. If you can call an imaginary
character in an imaginary street in an imaginary town beside an imaginary
river on a flat world carried on four elephants balancing on a giant turtle
that swims through the universe whilst being orbited by the sun and moon,
realistic.
(Eat your heart out Henry James :-)

Stephen

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