Dan,

Thanks for the comments. Your ambient plane idea did the trick!

Thanks,
Sean

"dan B hentschel" <dan### [at] alumritedu> wrote:
> There seems to be some inconsistency in how the right-hand wall meets the
> ceiling at the corners. It looks like there are some small holes in the
> ceiling right at the intersection. Similarly, there's a small black streak
> in the bottom right-hand corner of the image.
>
> I also find the shadows a bit confusing in places, causing me to wonder
> where all the light is coming from. The overall impression is quite
> pleasing, but when I look at the light patterns on the ceiling, it just
> looks a bit wrong. It's hard to describe, but the pattern of lighter/darker
> areas along the left-hand wall and ceiling seam don't feel right.
>
> As another person pointed out, the window frame needs to be lit. I would
> recommend a large, brightly ambient plane to the left of the image. That
> would have the added benefit of lighting the robots slightly more and
> possibly cleaning up the shadows on the ceiling at the same time that it
> lights up the window frame.
>
> Overall, it's a very nice looking image. Very good modelling work.
>
>  - dan B hentschel

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