Tim Nikias wrote:
>So, this is the latest installment of my Worldbowl
>Improvements.

It looks great.

I think real paper would shine more, even with this dim light. Also if you
made it translucent, well, that'd be great. It'd look even better if you
wrote the notes on the notebook by yourself (you could scan your writing or
just use a tablet). The overall scene looks a bit too clean. You could add
some scratches to the table and things like that.
Keep up the great work.

--
Jonathan.

Post a reply to this message