My opinions:

First of all, I love the expressions on those dudes.  Your models are
really well done and their humor really comes through.  I also think the
lighting and textures are impressive.  That brick wall looks *great*.

Things I'd change:
- I'd saturate the color of the bricks more and redden them a bit.
(Maybe it's just my monitor, but I doubt it.)
- I'd fill in the missing bricks or put holes in the mortar where the
bricks are supposed to be.  Brick walls with missing bricks have holes.
- I'd make the guy in the middle look like he is ready to catch the
ball or has just passed it to someone else.  To me, anyway, he looks a
bit confused about the ball, like he's never seen one before or isn't
sure what to do with it.
- You might want to make the shadows sharper.  Sunlight shadows aren't
perfectly sharp but I think they might be sharper than what you have.

The whole thing looks like a scaled-down version of some original,
which is okay, in my opinion.  I'm just pointing it out because it
often isn't the intended effect.

Alan Holding wrote:
>Hello, all.
>
>Currently updating an old image (original here:
>http://news.povray.org/povray.binaries.images/19166/).
>
>Any comments?
>
>Ta,
>Alan.
>
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