Looks great so far. Here's what I think cold be improved:

Give it some foreground. Maybe a patch of water plants would do it.

The girl is currently on a -y move so her hair should be flowing in
the opposite direction.

Give the first two rocks slight outward ripples, and keep in mind the
timing :) If you observe the speed ripples spread in water in real
life, then by giving them the appropriate spread in you picture you'll
give a more focused idea of time.


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