On Mon, 13 May 2002 23:26:26 +0200, Tim Nikias wrote:
> Looks pretty nice.
> 
> But you should definitely put a sun somewhere (lightsource), cause its
> looking like it'll be raining soon, or there are just too many clouds to
> have a warm day at the beach...
> 
> That umbrella needs to be somewhat smoother I think, it looks too
> static, hard, whatever.
> 
> And I miss some waves and foam, and wet (darker) sand, and some grass-
> blades on the dunes, and...
> 
> I know. Its a WIP. Just making suggestions... ;-)

Yep everything he said plus the water looks way too reflective, the people
look a bit dry and flat (I've never seen good skin texture yet in any 
raytracing), and looks asthough you're using some ambient light and there
aren't many shadows.  

-- 
#local i=.1;#local I=(i/i)/i;#local l=(i+i)/i;#local ll=(I/i)/l;box{<-ll,
-((I/I)+l),-ll><ll,-l,ll>pigment{checker scale l}finish{ambient((I/l)/I)+
(l/I)}}sphere{<i-i,l-l,(I/l)>l/l pigment{rgb((I/l)/I)}finish{reflection((
I/l)/I)-(l/I)specular(I/l)/I}}light_source{<I-l,I+I,(I-l)/l>l/l} // Steve

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