The trees and sky look good, and I like the window frame. 

I think that using the alphabet blocks is a bit over the top
for this scene, the words would look good carved into the 
table roughly or written in condensation on the window. 

A great first scene, you can be proud of it, I look forward 
to seeing your work in the future. 

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Cheers
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