This looks good, I'd expect the chocolate to 
be a bit more shiny but maybe that's just 
like a stereotypical minds eye thing.  Don't
think I've ever seen good steam, maybe make it 
more yellow and less bright, ie more absorbant. 

It all fits together nicely as a scene, but 
could benefit from a few bits and pieces such 
as salt and pepper pots, T-spoon, packet of 
cigaretts etc, the same old story, so much to 
do and so little time to do it in. 

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