This is looking good.  

I wouldn't say that the problem here is scale but light.
It just seems to be ambient light at the moment, and 
in the real world you'd expect to see many more shadows
coming from the various light sources (even of a day time).  
As a result of this problem the broken wall is totally 
lost in itself, there's no contrast between the front and 
back of that ruined building, no light falloff etc. 

The car looks good but a bit flat, can't see the top or
bottom of it just a straight on view of the side, either
moving the car or moving the camera would solve this I 
think, (it's probably not helped by the lighting either). 

We're hearing on the news here that you're having the worst
weather in SA for 40 years, constant rain for 8 days, so 
maybe your usual flare for getting it right first time is 
being hampered by light deprivation:-)

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