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Nice! The lighting could be a bit more interesting, e.g. more contrast
(as LightBeam suggested). And the sofa texture looks a bit like marble,
don't know if that would be comfortable ;)
Florian
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"Wagner" <nomail@nomail> wrote:
> This is a scene I'm working on. Suggestions are welcome.
>
> Wagner
The corner unit seems to be too well fitted into the corner, it looks like
it is actually further over than the skirting board. Also the blinds look a
bit too solid. These are both very minor critisms I know but I really
couldn't see anything else wrong with the image. A very nice image.
Sean
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"Wagner" <nomail@nomail> wrote:
> This is a scene I'm working on. Suggestions are welcome.
>
> Wagner
It's great as far as I can tell. I like that there is no TV as well. I would
put a flower in the vase to top it off.
tom
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Wagner wrote:
> This is a scene I'm working on. Suggestions are welcome.
The light's a little too ambient and doesn't seem realistic.. I would
expect to see more shadows in this room. Also, natural lighting can't
come anywhere near the power of direct sunlight, so either dim it a bit,
or make the sunlight brighter so the radiosity (which I assume you're
using) lights up the back left corner a bit.
Other than that, I think it looks great. Putting a flower or two in that
little vase would add a bit of color to the scene and also create more
of a focal point (which you may not want). Scattering around some common
household odds and ends would make the room feel a little more lived in.
-Xplo
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Thank you all for the comments and suggestions.
This scene is a early WIP.
Like some of you have suggested, I was planing to put a flower in the white
vase... ;)
Some bottles on the corner table are going to be placed too.
I intend to model my on chairs. With a leather texture probably...
I'll post the changes when I can.
Thanks again,
Wagner
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> Nice! The lighting could be a bit more interesting, e.g. more contrast
> (as LightBeam suggested). And the sofa texture looks a bit like marble,
> don't know if that would be comfortable ;)
Our local shopping center has marble seats. (I kid you not!)
Oh wait - last year they took the marble seating and put bits of
stainless steel in the shape of seats on top of it. (Give them enough
time, maybe they'll come up with something less looky and more comfy!)
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Well I like it...
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Orchid XP v2 wrote:
> Oh wait - last year they took the marble seating and put bits of
> stainless steel in the shape of seats on top of it. (Give them enough
> time, maybe they'll come up with something less looky and more comfy!)
No they wont. If you're sitting you're:
1. Not Shopping
2. Using up a car space
The cafes will have comfy seats, but the other seats are there just for
orphaned husbands ...
Cheers!
Rick Measham
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Rick Measham wrote:
> Orchid XP v2 wrote:
>
>> Oh wait - last year they took the marble seating and put bits of
>> stainless steel in the shape of seats on top of it. (Give them enough
>> time, maybe they'll come up with something less looky and more comfy!)
>
>
> No they wont. If you're sitting you're:
> 1. Not Shopping
> 2. Using up a car space
>
> The cafes will have comfy seats, but the other seats are there just for
> orphaned husbands ...
>
OTOH, in a mall near me (Pacific View Mall, Ventura, California), when
they remodeled a year or so ago, they replaced all the old hard seating
with nicely cushioned, very comforable sofas and chairs. And a lot of
them as well. Nice being a Californian... ;-)
-=- Larry -=-
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Everybody else can hold back if they want to, but when I saw this, I said,
"Wow!" The table is very cleverly constructed - I never would have thought
of using torii like that. And I can't wait until I can make radiosity do
*that* to a scene.
You could deepen the shadows a teeny bit. And I'll vouch for the flower in
the vase - almost no-one would keep an empty vase hanging around. But I
love the restraint - there's just enough color in the scene without being
too much, giving it very good balance.
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