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From: Jim Charter
Subject: Re: What do you think now...? (still wip 245kb's)
Date: 20 Feb 2006 12:37:59
Message: <43f9fe77$1@news.povray.org>
Lance Birch wrote:
> "St." <dot### [at] dotcom> wrote in message news:43f9f513@news.povray.org...
> 
>>Phew! That was a long 2 hours!  ;)
>>
>>Ok, I've implemented Lance' deep rich blue as the background - not too sure
>>about it <snip>
> 
> 
> Now that I see it, neither am I... heh :S
> 
> I actually quite like the neutral colours of the surface material from the last
> one, and the neutral colours of the flames - maybe the red is a little
> overpowering?
> 
> Hmm... *ponders*
> 


Well I'm sure and I'm sure it's a great image.

Maybe room for some fine tuning but basucally I think it is on track.

I particularily like the lighter, refracted blue in the ice/glass above 
the "flames"

I also think that the rich wood color makes and important contribution. 
  The color scheme is basically the three "primaries" red/blue/yellow. 
The difficult place is perhaps the grey area under the mantel but the 
way the picture crops right along the line of the tiles saves it.


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From: Darren New
Subject: Re: What do you think now...? (still wip 245kb's)
Date: 20 Feb 2006 12:42:07
Message: <43f9ff6f$1@news.povray.org>
I'd buy one of those to put on *my* fireplace! :-)


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From: Trevor G Quayle
Subject: Re: What do you think now...? (still wip 245kb's)
Date: 20 Feb 2006 12:55:01
Message: <web.43fa02189fc3f2946c4803960@news.povray.org>
I like it so far, but I'll be a little critical for you:

1) A shinier, more reflectier, brassier texture on the dragons (if you
like...)

2) The water drops should not be pointed at the top, but rather be
elliptical (pointy drops is something we all draw as kids, but doesn't
exist in reality).  Also, have the water pool extend around the edge of the
mantle and the drops forming below.  As it is right now, the drops look like
they are dropping off the top or side of the mantle which doesn't look
right.


-tgq


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From: Stefan Viljoen
Subject: Re: What do you think now...? (still wip 245kb's)
Date: 21 Feb 2006 00:45:52
Message: <43faa90f@news.povray.org>
St. spake:

> Phew! That was a long 2 hours!  ;)

2 hours is long for a rendering? I thought a 1000 is long... :)
 
> Ok, I've implemented Lance' deep rich blue as the background - not too
> sure about it, but would appreciate other's thoughts.

The first image was a great image, now this is a fab image! It looks very
alien to me, both warm and inviting and glowing and ominous - very well
done.

-- 
Stefan Viljoen
Software Support Technician / Programmer
Polar Design Solutions


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From: Jellby
Subject: Re: What do you think...?
Date: 21 Feb 2006 11:33:13
Message: <egmpc3-4q6.ln1@badulaque.unex.es>
Among other things, St. saw fit to write:

>   It's funny that you said that. This image started off with a vision of
>   an
> old guy sat in an armchair in front of his open coal fire with his feet up
> on a cracket and one arm and hand showing holding a freezing cold glass of
> water, (so in effect, all you would see is his legs and slippers, and to
> the
> right, his arm and hand holding the glass - kind of like this  \ //  ).

... then dropping the glass and muttering "Rosebud"?

-- 
light_source{9+9*x,1}camera{orthographic look_at(1-y)/4angle 30location
9/4-z*4}light_source{-9*z,1}union{box{.9-z.1+x clipped_by{plane{2+y-4*x
0}}}box{z-y-.1.1+z}box{-.1.1+x}box{.1z-.1}pigment{rgb<.8.2,1>}}//Jellby


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From: St 
Subject: Re: What do you think...?
Date: 21 Feb 2006 13:46:37
Message: <43fb600d@news.povray.org>
"Jellby" <me### [at] privacynet> wrote in message 
news:egm### [at] badulaqueunexes...
> Among other things, St. saw fit to write:
>
>>   It's funny that you said that. This image started off with a vision of
>>   an
>> old guy sat in an armchair in front of his open coal fire with his feet 
>> up
>> on a cracket and one arm and hand showing holding a freezing cold glass 
>> of
>> water, (so in effect, all you would see is his legs and slippers, and to
>> the
>> right, his arm and hand holding the glass - kind of like this  \ //  ).
>
> ... then dropping the glass and muttering "Rosebud"?

     Heh... :)   I'd like to try that myself, but the other half would slap 
me!  :oO

     ;)

    ~Steve~


>
> -- 
> light_source{9+9*x,1}camera{orthographic look_at(1-y)/4angle 30location
> 9/4-z*4}light_source{-9*z,1}union{box{.9-z.1+x clipped_by{plane{2+y-4*x
> 0}}}box{z-y-.1.1+z}box{-.1.1+x}box{.1z-.1}pigment{rgb<.8.2,1>}}//Jellby


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From: St 
Subject: Update: still wip-lots of things to add...
Date: 21 Feb 2006 14:11:02
Message: <43fb65c6@news.povray.org>
I could keep this image to a fairly low compression this time because of the 
change in that back wall...

  I've added some <hopefully!> velvet-looking fleur-de-lis patterns as the 
background wallpaper... And a pencil.

  I plan to add an openly ripped letter, and some coins too, and maybe a 
mirror behind the ice block... (not sure).

   The rounded drips (re-modeled now) are there as per Somebody's 
suggestion, but I would like further comments on these...?

    What other things have you got on your mantle at this moment?

   ~Steve~


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From: Orchid XP v2
Subject: Re: What do you think...?
Date: 21 Feb 2006 14:50:50
Message: <43fb6f1a$1@news.povray.org>
>> I like it.
> 
> 
>  Thanks. And yours is coming along nicely too.

Ah.

Yes...

I must admit it didn't immediately convey to me "fire and ice". More 
like "hey, there's a lump of glass with a cool pattern inside it!"


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From: Orchid XP v2
Subject: Re: Update: still wip-lots of things to add...
Date: 21 Feb 2006 14:52:36
Message: <43fb6f84$1@news.povray.org>
To borrow the catchphrase of a certain infamous American institution... 
"I'm lovin' it."


Definitely conveys "fire" much more strongly now. (Not sure about the 
"ice" part yet... maybe some of the extreme edges could be slightly cloudy?)


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From: Chambers
Subject: Re: Update: still wip-lots of things to add...
Date: 21 Feb 2006 15:49:40
Message: <43fb7ce4$1@news.povray.org>
Much better than the second one, except for one thing: that pencil lying 
there, all nice and straight, is really bugging me.  Just add a little 
random rotation, and it will be great :)

...Chambers


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