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Well I've tweaked loads of things in my scene since the last version I posted.
Thanks for all the comments, they've helped a lot!
Anyway, I'm now thinking that this looks finished. What do you think? Does it
need something more or is it complete?
Cheers,
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Tek
http://www.evilsuperbrain.com
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It's better than before. Try working on the surface of the water in the
glass (make it not so flat), if you want. Primarily, I think the vegetation
needs work. It looks too blurry. I assume you're not trying to make it look
detailed, but it could still be improved.
- Slime
[ http://www.slimeland.com/ ]
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Slime <slm### [at] slimeland com> wrote in message news:3e0d00c5$1@news.povray.org...
> It's better than before. Try working on the surface of the water in the
> glass (make it not so flat), if you want. Primarily, I think the vegetation
> needs work. It looks too blurry. I assume you're not trying to make it look
> detailed, but it could still be improved.
Thanks. I agree with both those suggestions, but I have no idea how to improve
the trees! The technique I'm using was discovered by accident, so I don't really
understand how to fix it.
I'll have a play with the water surface. It has some ripples in it but they
aren't really visible. And I'll see if I can do anything with the trees.
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Tek
http://www.evilsuperbrain.com
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On Sat, 28 Dec 2002 03:43:23 -0000
"Tek" <tek### [at] evilsuperbraincom> wrote:
> Thanks. I agree with both those suggestions, but I have no idea how to
> improve the trees! The technique I'm using was discovered by accident,
> so I don't really understand how to fix it.
I think that making the greens on vegetation less "standard" would
suffice, as they are not the main focus. For the rest, the sun light is
very nice, and the overall scene has an interesting "high mountain"
ambient.
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Jaime Vives Piqueres
La Persistencia de la Ignorancia
http://www.ignorancia.org
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Jaime Vives Piqueres wrote:
> I think that making the greens on vegetation less "standard" would
>suffice, as they are not the main focus. For the rest, the sun light is
>very nice, and the overall scene has an interesting "high mountain"
>ambient.
>
>Jaime Vives Piqueres
>
>La Persistencia de la Ignorancia
>http://www.ignorancia.org
>
I agree, tone the vegetation done some, to let the foreground stand out
more.
Good luck on your entry!
RG - just because I'm paranoid doesn't mean everyone's not out to get me
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>Anyway, I'm now thinking that this looks finished. What do you think? Does it
>need something more or is it complete?
The only thing I think needs to be changed is the surface of the water in
the glass - it's too still.
This looks like a pretty good entry for the topic in the IRTC.
In case you were wondering, I was actually the one who suggested "frozen
moment" to the IRTC topic suggestion system. :-)
Rohan _e_ii
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