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From: Tim Nikias
Subject: What shall I put in her hand? Take 2 (it's finished)
Date: 4 Jan 2002 09:29:51
Message: <3C35BBFF.8DFF39E3@gmx.de>
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So, this is what I came up with, and what I think fits best in what I wanted
to achieve. If you have other ideas for her hand, why don't you go ahead and
make an image yourself? I'd be interested to see how the main-idea can be
interpreted...
I've used a height-field for the waves caused by the woman, and used 3 planes to
create the clouds. Though it's not too realistic, I think it has a nice mood, and
that's
all I wanted to achieve with this one.
Any comments?
Tim
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From: Tom Melly
Subject: Re: What shall I put in her hand? Take 2 (it's finished)
Date: 4 Jan 2002 09:37:51
Message: <3c35be3f$1@news.povray.org>
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"Tim Nikias" <Tim### [at] gmx de> wrote in message
news:3C35BBFF.8DFF39E3@gmx.de...
Very nice - I'd lower her buttocks a little into the water, they look a little
too firm (I'm assuming that lowering them is easier than flattening them).
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IMHO the heart should not match her in both texture and *quality*
of color. It should be rounded and full and of a red texture
that clearly is other than she is made out of- and more perhaps
more lively/complex than it is; a contrast that is still embraced
by her hand so to speak.
After all it is a featured part of the composition.
-peter
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Current obsession: "Ballet pour ma fille."
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From: John D Gwinner
Subject: Re: What shall I put in her hand? Take 2 (it's finished)
Date: 4 Jan 2002 12:47:03
Message: <3c35ea97@news.povray.org>
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I liked the original, but I think these are good ideas.
== John ==
"Dearmad" <dea### [at] applesnakenet> wrote in message
news:3C35E649.CB36F30A@applesnake.net...
> IMHO the heart should not match her in both texture and *quality*
> of color. It should be rounded and full and of a red texture
> that clearly is other than she is made out of- and more perhaps
> more lively/complex than it is; a contrast that is still embraced
> by her hand so to speak.
>
> After all it is a featured part of the composition.
>
> -peter
> --
> Current obsession: "Ballet pour ma fille."
> http://www.applesnake.net
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From: JRG
Subject: Re: What shall I put in her hand? Take 2 (it's finished)
Date: 4 Jan 2002 13:25:00
Message: <3c35f37c@news.povray.org>
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Yeah, I like this one. The waves look good, and I like the new texture for the woman,
much more *relaxing*.
I would still put some work on the clouds: 3 planes sounds not sufficient if you're
aiming to a 'realistic look' (aren't you). I would try with at least 20 or 30. At the
moment it's difficult to 'locate' every single cloud, and it suffers a bit at the
horizon.
Here's an example of what I mean: in this pic all the clouds have a 3d appearance,
and can be easily distinguish from each other. In your scene, at the moment, it's
difficult to locate where a cloud begins and where another one.
I'm fussy just because I find this one a beautiful scene. :-)
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On Fri, 04 Jan 2002 15:28:15 +0100, Tim Nikias wrote:
>So, this is what I came up with, and what I think fits best in what I wanted
>to achieve. If you have other ideas for her hand, why don't you go ahead and
>make an image yourself? I'd be interested to see how the main-idea can be
>interpreted...
This looks much better than the original, but could use some changes as
mentioned by others.
Keep up the good work.
--
Cheers
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From: Slime
Subject: Re: What shall I put in her hand? Take 2 (it's finished)
Date: 4 Jan 2002 17:05:55
Message: <3c362743@news.povray.org>
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I think she needs some sort of hair. The bald head isn't working for me. =)
(Seriously, though...)
- Slime
[ http://www.slimeland.com/ ]
[ http://www.slimeland.com/images/ ]
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From: Jari Juslin
Subject: Re: What shall I put in her hand? Take 2 (it's finished)
Date: 4 Jan 2002 23:04:21
Message: <3C367B44.8041FC87@iki.fi>
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Tim Nikias wrote:
> So, this is what I came up with, and what I think fits best in what
> I wanted to achieve.
Very good! I has improved a lot. Any chance of getting either 1280x960
render or source, I'd like to use it as desktop wallpaper?
--
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From: Tim Nikias
Subject: Re: What shall I put in her hand? Take 2 (it's finished)
Date: 5 Jan 2002 04:30:39
Message: <3C36C782.B77835D1@gmx.de>
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Well, I guess you two are right about enhancing the heart a little more.
I'll look into it...
Tim
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From: Tim Nikias
Subject: Re: What shall I put in her hand? Take 2 (it's finished)
Date: 5 Jan 2002 04:32:16
Message: <3C36C7E4.A906B08C@gmx.de>
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Ok, I'll try!
Thanks for the note on 20 planes, I always thought somewhat around 5 could do the job,
but guess
I was wrong! ;)
Tim
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