Yeah, I like this one. The waves look good, and I like the new texture for the woman,
much more *relaxing*.

I would still put some work on the clouds: 3 planes sounds not sufficient if you're
aiming to a 'realistic look' (aren't you). I would try with at least 20 or 30. At the
moment it's difficult to 'locate' every single cloud, and it suffers a bit at the
horizon.

Here's an example of what I mean: in this pic all the clouds have a 3d appearance,
and can be easily distinguish from each other. In your scene, at the moment, it's
difficult to locate where a cloud begins and where another one.

I'm fussy just because I find this one a beautiful scene. :-)


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