1) added relfection blur and made the surface more shiny on the piano.
2) made the songbook larger
3) made the wine glasses smaller
4) fixed the wine reflection/shadow
5) made the floor checkered
6) added a circle of pillars/gazibo type deal around the piano for a
surroundings...but that is just a test....looking for something better.
7) flattened the rose a bit.
kane wrote:
> 1) added relfection blur and made the surface more shiny on the piano.> 2) made the songbook larger> 3) made the wine glasses smaller> 4) fixed the wine reflection/shadow> 5) made the floor checkered> 6) added a circle of pillars/gazibo type deal around the piano for a> surroundings...but that is just a test....looking for something better.> 7) flattened the rose a bit.>> [Image]
I would add photons and if you already have photon in it tweak them so
that they display more caustics
From: Mark Simonelli
Subject: Re: Piano revised
Date: 5 Jul 2000 20:28:19
Message: <3963d2a3@news.povray.org>
The keys need beveled edges and they look too long.
I like the composition.
Suggestions:
A wine stain on the sheet music might look cool.
I would use a wood floor or marble floor. It looks like the piano is in the
kitchen.
Put something in the foreground that is only visible in the reflection on
the glass.
kane wrote in message <39634711@news.povray.org>...
>1) added relfection blur and made the surface more shiny on the piano.>2) made the songbook larger>3) made the wine glasses smaller>4) fixed the wine reflection/shadow>5) made the floor checkered>6) added a circle of pillars/gazibo type deal around the piano for a>surroundings...but that is just a test....looking for something better.>7) flattened the rose a bit.>>>
It looks a lot better, but the keys are still way too long (unless you just
have a really weird piano).
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> The keys need beveled edges and they look too long.
In real world measurements that would be about 9 mm. for the black
keys and 14 mm. for the white.
Otherwise it looks good.
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You've added so much to this since the last version that I saw,
but you seem to have taken something away aswell. Maybe it's
just that all the "whites" in the image are a bit too white.
The reflection of the floor in the glasses reminds me of Twin
Peaks. Someone else mentioned the possibility of adding a wooden
floor, I think that this would warm the image up considerably.
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