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19 Aug 2024 04:25:35 EDT (-0400)
  Re: WIP Ice mountain (63kbu)  
From: Philippe Debar
Date: 1 Mar 2001 06:00:50
Message: <phdebar-8339E6.12010501032001@povray.org>
Hi, I'am back !

This image is really beautiful.
(-> background desktop image)


I'll add a bit of criticism (and praises)


* Gosh this is cold, nice color scheme.

* Really love the water (and I would be very interested to see that 
code), although it could benefit from a wee bit of depth (transparency).

* I'd like to have a still better feeling of vastness, openness. The 
space does feel a bit too square and enclosed to my taste... Some wild 
suggestions : wider image ratio (16:9?), change cliff organisation (less 
straight, less square, vary height a bit more in background, maybe more 
rash variations), remove fence on the far side of water or restrict it 
to a precise area (so it doesn't feel so enclosed)(is this really a 
fence on the other side ? It looks way too big to me...?)

* Ooooooh, very nice crystal towers.

* Something is slightly bothering me with the viewpoint (is "framing" a 
correct english word ?) although I cannot put my finger on it.

* An additional comment on te waterfall : how would it look if it was a 
smidgen taller (summit a bit higher then the cliff) ?

* aaaaarrrrgggghhhhhh blue & jpg !!! Does anybody know a way to solve 
that ?

* Nice story...

* I am jealous... I never dream like that ;-(


Povingly,


Philippe


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