On Mon, 03 May 2004 00:30:11 +0200, LightBeam <s.f### [at] tiscalifr> wrote:
> A wip...
> Comments, suggetions, cheers are welcomes...

*applauds vigorously whilst showing off the letters "L.I.G.H.T.B.E.A.M" 
painted on his bu...eeh, no*

*composes himself, and shows his approval with a slight nod, like a true 
gentleman*


The crayons seem a little unused (and slightly biased towards purple).
Most of all though, the whole thing is way too clean. If actual kids had 
made that drawing on the paper, there would probably be several drawings 
directly on the floor as well...
Other things that come to mind:
- Colored hand/fingerprints. Crayons tend to rub off as much on the 
"artist" as on the "art".
- Scratches in the floor. The wood looks great, but it doesn't look like a 
floor children have been playing on.


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FE

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