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From: Phil Cook
Date: 20 Jan 2004 07:59:05
Message: <opr12rpwjqp4ukzs@news.povray.org>
On Mon, 19 Jan 2004 11:44:28 -0600, Shay <sah### [at] simcopartscom> wrote:

>
> "Phil Cook" <phi### [at] nospamdeckingdealscouk> wrote in message
> news:opr10vixvop4ukzs@news.povray.org...
> |
> | OK here goes critique away <gulp>
>
> Nice pic, but the light is in a bizarre place. A light-source which
> suggests some geometry outside of the scene would IMO be a real
> improvement. Something like a crack of light through a door would suit
> the mood. Placing the book and glasses on a table would allow you to do
> this and still maintain a spotlight effect.

Thanks Shay, the spotlight was originally going to part of a desk-lamp but 
it didn't fit the mood (too cluttered), I see what you mean about making 
the unseen impinge on the picture though. Yet more twiddling to do.

--
Phil

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