On Tue, 9 May 2000 19:00:28 -0400, "TonyB" <ben### [at] panamac-comnet>
wrote:

>>Somehow I don't like the shape of it. What bothers me is the contour
>>of the eye. To me, it seems too thick and the thickness itself could
>>decrease in a more visually appealing way. Sorry for being picky.
>
>Could you be a little more specific on the "could decrease in a more
>visually appealing way" part?
>
I know, bad wording on my side, sorry.

The left part is too thick, and it might look better if the swoosh
ended in a point instead of a sphere. The thick end of the swoosh
could use some work, it looks to me too heavy and maybe a bit sloppy.

I'll try to come up with a sketch which illustrates what I mean.


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