I've spent a bit more time looking at it. The guy at the end; His left shoulder
doesn't look right. Turn him more face on and see how that looks. How about
having his eyes open but unfocused? By that I mean both looking straight ahead
and not toed in towards the camera. 
The Woman on the far right: The outline of her breast is more the shape you get
in full gravity. The liquid would support it more. Using Vicky, less droop, less
lay down

Regards
	Stephen

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