In article <38C35EDE.32DA8EDC@psu.edu>, John <jch### [at] psuedu> wrote:

> I've submitted one image before, but this is my first actual scene.  I'm
> awfully proud of it, but I'd mor ethan welcome any suggestions for
> improving it.  Thanks.

Nice modelling, but it looks kind of...sterile. I mean it is too clean, 
it doesn't look like anyone lives there. Maybe randomize the wood 
paneling a little bit, it looks like one chunk of wood. Use random 
translations, scales, and rotations, and vary the color a little. And 
the things on top of the stair railing seem awkward, maybe if you 
squashed the top smaller sphere to half it's height, so it is no longer 
spherical.

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Chris Huff
e-mail: chr### [at] yahoocom
Web page: http://chrishuff.dhs.org/

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