In article <3d5b6d52@news.povray.org>,
 "Mick Hazelgrove" <mic### [at] mhazelgrovefsnetcouk> wrote:

> Here's a whiter version of my bird pic. I'm curious to know which version 
> people prefer.

This is very nice...just a couple things:

The barbed wire looks like it is supposed to be rusty, but looks too 
orange and even. I'd suggest a dark gray with areas that are closer to 
the color of those tail feathers. It also looks too thick and the barbs 
too long, but that could be the kind of wire.

The feathers don't seem very "fluffy" to me. It looks kind of like a 
painted carving. Maybe if you could make a couple stray feathers poke 
out...

I think the eyes should be more orange.

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