In article <3b0daab3@news.povray.org>, Paul Jones says...
> Just trying out some studies in macros and compostion etc... or one could
> say I am doodling. Please comment, especially on the flame, if anyone has a
> good candle flame they want to share , I would not turn it away (i found
> this flame to be very difficult, two scattering medias...)...:-)
> 
> tia!
> 
> paul
> 
For one: the glass pieces to me look too much 'not present', I don't 
know how to say it. Their presence is too little accentuated, as if they 
could vanish any moment.
And then: what floor is the board on? A table top? Even when doodling 
you could give the impression we look at recognizable objects. 
At last: the perspective is somewhat odd, IMO. Perhaps the camera should 
be a lot lower?

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Regards,  Sander

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