On 4-10-2013 7:34, s.day wrote:
>
> A great start, the atmosphere looks good but as you say more detail needed in
> the foreground.
>
> Not sure what impact it would have if changed but to me there seems to be
> something odd in the rain drops. I would expect them all to be falling in the
> same direction (or very nearly the same one) there seem to be a few random drops
> that are doing their own thing. (mostly in the bottom right of the image). I
> have not looked at Jaimes macro so do not know if this can be changed easily,
> still they do look pretty good though.

It is just an random parameter added to the falling angle.

>
> It would be good if you could see the stream in the foreground a bit more (I
> cannot think of a better use for a high frequency ripples normal). If you have
> one already it does not show up due to the fog/atmosphere.

Hm. It is a normal indeed.

>
> Look forward to seeing future versions of this scene.

You will most surely :-)

Thomas

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