> Hi,
>
> Those are very interesting changes from your last post. The new tar looks a lot
> better, but maybe a little too bumpy. I would imagine that tar would be a little
> smoother on top, even if it's covering a bumpy surface because tar is so
> viscous.
Tar gives a smooth surface, but is hardly never used by itself. It's 
mixed with gravel, sand, rubber, pulverised glass, some fibers and other 
things to make asphalt.
Asphalt is much more stiff than tar.
That aley is not covered with tar but with croase asphalt.

>
> The lighter-colored objects that run along the bottom and middle of the building
> on the left look better now by adding some contrast to the building and framing
> the flower. However, in my opinion the previous brick colors, being darker than
> the new colors, contrasted better with the sunflower. I think adjusting the
> light so that it shines on the sunflower more is an improvement.
>
> One suggestion might be to add some curvature to the sunflower stem, if
> possible.
>
> Regards,
> Dave Blandston
>

Sunflowers stems are prety straight, only curving near the flower itself.


Alain

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