Thomas de Groot wrote:
>  For a first try, this is really excellent. The grass in particular is one 
> of the best I have seen.
> 
Thank you, Thomas.


> Personally, I find the tree trunks too smooth and would like to see a bit of 
> rough bark. Also, the two dead trees, on both sides of the ruin, are a bit 
> overdone, imo. Only one dead tree should be much more natural looking in 
> this context. I would choose the right one, and replace the left one by a 
> major bush.
> 
> Like Jaime, I would like to see some stone structure in the wall.
>
Will work on those.


> The raven on the cross is very appropriate, although maybe a bit of a 

> 



some more thought as I'm still not so sure about the direction to go...

...see my reply to Jim for more.

-Ive

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