"Ive" <"ive### [at] lilysoftorg"> schreef in bericht 
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> I've never made a serious attempt on doing an outdoor scene so here is
> my first try.
>
 For a first try, this is really excellent. The grass in particular is one 
of the best I have seen.

Personally, I find the tree trunks too smooth and would like to see a bit of 
rough bark. Also, the two dead trees, on both sides of the ruin, are a bit 
overdone, imo. Only one dead tree should be much more natural looking in 
this context. I would choose the right one, and replace the left one by a 
major bush.

Like Jaime, I would like to see some stone structure in the wall.

The raven on the cross is very appropriate, although maybe a bit of a 


Thomas

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