Warp wrote:
>   How about this:

Much better!  The "line of action" there clearly goes from head to pelvis to 
  upraised foot quite smoothly.

Maybe the elbows just a touch farther forward, unless you're going for a 
very surprised look.  I first imagined the character as kind of wandering 
around looking up in awe, more than surprised, so perhaps that colors my 
judgment.

-- 
   Darren New, San Diego CA, USA (PST)
   My fortune cookie said, "You will soon be
   unable to read this, even at arm's length."

Post a reply to this message