I think you are on the right track. Much has been said already, so I won't 
repeat. Just a remark though, about the wall texture. The vertical gradient 
is nice but too pronounced imo. I would prefer a more suble change or, in 
other words, shades of plaster that are closer together. The underlying 
stonework needs also some attention. Presently it is not clear what it 
consists of: bricks? stones? the boundaries look very diffuse.

You grass macro works well for the distance but less so for the foreground.

However, good work Kirk. I like this scene very much.

Thomas

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