Nice composition, nice trees, nice sky. :-)

The sails on the ship are bugging me--they're much too flat. If there's 
any wind at all, they're going to be slightly curved (and if there's 
not, they're going to be dangling and wrinkled).

The focal blur is quite grainy--you'll need to take your blur_samples 
much higher in the final version, but you probably know this already.

-- 
William Tracy
afi### [at] gmailcom -- wtr### [at] calpolyedu

The life of a Japanese cosplayer at Comike possesses strange 
similarities to that of the free range chicken.
     -- Shirt Guy Dom

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