"Allen Dotson" <all### [at] emailnutscom> schreef in bericht 
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> So, I'm doing this for art class.  It isn't finished yet, and I don't
> have too much time to get it finished.  But, it is a start.  One thing
> that stands out to me is the clouds... the sphere is way too small for
> me, so I'll replace that with a plane instead... only problem is the
> 27hour render times.
>
> Comments and Critique welcomed and requested...
>

For different reasons, the clouds seem to press down on the landscape, not 
necessarily because the sphere is too small. The first reason is that a 
proper atmosphere is missing, either a fog or a media, in order to give some 
depth to horizon distance and sky heights. A second, more psychological 
reason, is the elongated format and high horizon, which increase the weight 
of the clouds. However, imo, the first reason is the most important. 
Otherwise, good work! I like this scene.

Thomas

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