Nice work, Rob!

What mainly attracts my attention are the books. They are all so well-packed 
on their shelves. I would like to see them leaning against each other, and 
some shelves with empty spaces. That would make the scene less static, in a 
sense.

What disturbs me also is that the books seem all collections, or 
encyclopedies. Nothing wrong with that, but again, it makes the scene less 
lively. I would prefer to see a variety of sizes and colors, randomly mixed, 
alternating with stacks of books or papers. Paper is also what I would like 
to see more, elsewhere in the room, lying about, stacked roughly on the 
table and desk, filling the waste basket. Now, I know there are two kind of 
people: those who like to work in a clean, well-ordered environment, and 
those (like me!) who are unable to work there and, instead, work in a 
chaotic world of books and papers. So... maybe you are of the first kind, 
and then just forget about my comments.

One last comment though :-)
Studying on a wooden chair can become painful after a while. Some nice 
cushion would be nice for the buttocks!

Still, a very nice work!

Thomas

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