Personally, I like this version better than the first one :-)
The top snake needs something more indeed, but be careful not to destroy the 
present effect. If you show too much of its tail in the background, that 
might clutter the image.
I like Pan's idea to lift the head of the bottom snake a tiny bit. Would 
make the image more thrilling with tension. Open its mouth a tiny bit 
also...?

You're on the right track!

Thomas

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