I like the bracelet, I like the water, and I like where this is going.

Is the strange artifact (halo) that keeps the blue part of the bracelet 
from touching the water intentional?  If its a force-field then you've 
got it right.  If its meant to be plastic/glass/futuristic-clear-stuff 
then you should add some reflection or highlights.

Check out some of the recent postings that show water interacting with 
objects (nice work with a rectangular block and its corresponding ripple 
pattern).  In your case the scene would definitely benefit from some 
interaction between the bracelet and the water.

Not sure if writing, greebles, or other details might improve the 
perception of scale, but I'm sure you will think of something.

Looking forward to future cycles!

mine wrote:
> This was just meant to be some kind of futuristic electronic bracelet, then
> I started trying stuff with the plane below it. Eventually I came up with
> the water. This is my first water. The only thing is the water below it
> makes it look like something else. Maybe some kind of tiny spaceship.
> Anyway, I welcome any comments. :)
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