I have no suggestions to name.. however..

1. Lightning. I don't know what you are going for but to me it looks like a 
night scene. As such, it's way to bright.
The presence of a CG light is way to obvious. It completely washes out the 
colours and takes away the effects of, for     instance, your "laser" and 
fires. Have a look at these:
http://www.west-scotland-tourism.com/Glenborrodale-Castle/castle/Castle-night.jpg
http://lostworld.pair.com/disneyland/fantasyland/fantasyland_images/castle-night-sep99.jpg

2. Textures. As mentioned, you need to fix them.

3. Ground. Too sharp. Go with one of the previous suggestions.

4. Composition. I don't know what you want to focus on, but if you keep it 
like this the scene is too empty on
the right side. Nothing is going on there.

That's it for now.. :)

Regards,
Stefan

"St." <dot### [at] dotcom> wrote in message news:4521c11a@news.povray.org...
> ...Bad.
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> Just an update on 'Feathered Friends", but now I need a new name. 
> Suggestions?
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> I'm thinking about putting an ornate (I knew I shouldn't have typed that 
> word!) iron fence/railing just behind the skellington and running 
> alongside the river (south bank).
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>   Yes or no?
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>      ~Steve~
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